Wednesday 7 October 2015
National Poetry Day
To celebrate National Poetry Day the children in Class 3 have been reading the poem When Daddy Fell into the Pond by Alfred Noyse. It has made us all laugh.
We will be turning the poem into prose tomorrow, This means we will be writing in sentences using adjectives and noun phrases to make our work interesting.
On Friday we will be performing the poem to each other.
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22 comments:
Thank you Mr winter for a great literacy lesson.
I realy enjoyed it.
I loved National Poetry Day
To Mr Winter
I enjoyed watching the actions of when daddy fell into the pond even though I was at claranet lessons
From Isabel T
I think that the poem daddy fell into the pond was very funny and I hope that we will do some thing like that again.
It was so fun making story's of daddy fell into the pond I would love to hear the story's! I bet there great. (especially Jessica's)
From Molly xx
Daddy Fell into the Pond is really great it made me laugh so much
I really enjoyed the poem Daddy Fell into the Pond by Alfred Noyse. I also enjoyed acting out my poem with Eliana! I love poetry and I loved writing my story out of the poem just like a real author!
I have really enjoyed reading When Daddy Fell into The Pond. When we were performing the poems I worked with Josh.When we were writing pros we set it out in three paragraphs for the three verses.
I really like the poem "daddy Fell Into The Pond" .Its so funny, It even made my dad laugh.
Hi Mr Winter
I am enjoying when daddy fell in the pond.
I am liking my time in year3.
From Sophie
I really enjoied wathching the acting out!!! I think Alfred Noyes is a funny name noyes like is he noisy!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Me and Sophia have enjoyed working on a poem called Daddy Fell into the Pond.
We loved writing the story's about the poem.
The poem made everyone laugh.
I enjoied Daddy fell in the pond. I said I'd push my dad in the river at the park and He'd come out dripping wet with slimy green duckweed.
I loved doing Daddy fell in to the pond because i rote a lot
Hi Mr Winter
I like that we are doing when daddy fell in the pond.
From Sophie
I found the poem When Daddy Fell Into The Pond really funny and I can't wait to act it out!!!
Lily and me proformed the poem Daddy Fell in to the Pond .
Hi Mr Winter I loved reading Daddy fell in to the Pond I love poems it is really funny
From Phoebe
I am really enjoying writing about daddy fell into the pond!
It's really funny I think. Every one has done really hard Mr winter!
I have had great fun in year 2 sofa!
Niveydita said,
I liked it when we performed are poems when Daddy fell into the pond it was fun we rote them yesterday.
'Daddy Fell Into The Pond' is a nice poem because it is funny, rhymes at some points and has a bit of repitition aswell.Here's the first verse:
'Everyone grumbled.The sky was grey.
We had nothing to do and nothing to say,
We were nearing the end of a dismal day.
And there seemed to be nothing beyond,
THEN
Daddy fell into the pond!'
The next vere they all cheer up and are happy.The final verse talks about how pleased the are but poor daddy.
We really like learning about Daddy fell into the pond. It started boring in the poem but then it went really happy and funny .
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